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導(dǎo)讀：1.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分），【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提綱作文，【名師點(diǎn)睛】本作文從實(shí)際生活出發(fā)，以英語的交際性和實(shí)用性為目標(biāo)，2.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國I】，【名師點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.動(dòng)筆前，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，[2014·新課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅰ]，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)  1.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請(qǐng)給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間； 2. 活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 結(jié)語已為你寫好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 【參考答案】 Dear Lucy, I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。 【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提綱作文。 【名師點(diǎn)睛】本作文從實(shí)際生活出發(fā)，以英語的交際性和實(shí)用性為目標(biāo)，兼顧尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意義。體現(xiàn)了課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求的以知識(shí)運(yùn)用為教學(xué)目標(biāo)的要求。在高三備考時(shí)，應(yīng)該多從把語言作為交流的 工具的角度去準(zhǔn)備書面表達(dá)。 2.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國I】 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下： 欄目介紹； 稿件內(nèi)容； 稿件長度：約400詞； 交稿日期：6月28日前。 注意： 詞數(shù)100左右； 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫的； 開頭語已為你寫好。 【答案】 Dear Peter, I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息要求寫一封給美國朋友彼得寫信的約稿，為學(xué)校校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的文章。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，簡單介紹校英文報(bào)欄目的情況。2、建議Peter介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活。3、稿件的要求及時(shí)間。寫作時(shí)根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)。就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4、注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。 【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.運(yùn)用了過去分詞作后置定語， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.運(yùn)用了賓語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量習(xí)語和短語，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。 【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提綱作文。 【名師點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和過渡詞語，不僅增強(qiáng)了表達(dá)效果，而且實(shí)現(xiàn)了形式與內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一。 [2014·新課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅰ] 假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：住宿 accommodation 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 本文是一篇書信應(yīng)用文。文章內(nèi)容是李華計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，看到廣告后感覺廣告里有一些問題沒說清楚，想要給校方寫信咨詢有關(guān)事項(xiàng)?？忌⒁庑诺母袷剑€要注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，即以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，兼有將來時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┻B詞，使文章自然、流暢，還可以使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯來提高作文檔次。 【參考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam， I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully， Li Hua [2014·新課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅱ] 一家英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“十年后的我”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想完成短文。 1. 家庭； 2. 工作； 3. 業(yè)余生活。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 本文的話題是“十年后的我”，要求考生從家庭、工作和業(yè)余生活三方面來暢想十年以后的自己。文章應(yīng)該使用將來時(shí)和第一人稱。 參考要點(diǎn)：1.十年以后的生活和現(xiàn)在完全不同，會(huì)成為一個(gè)成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可愛的孩子。2.希望自己能夠在自己喜歡的計(jì)算機(jī)行業(yè)工作，做一名程序設(shè)計(jì)師。工作順利，和同事相處融洽。3.在業(yè)余生活中經(jīng)常參加鍛煉，如游泳、登山等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。 本文要求考生充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來， 注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。考生要根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。 【參考范文】 I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful. 【2013?課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅰ】書面表達(dá)(滿分25分) 假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡 航班號(hào)：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語和介紹語已為你寫好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing?___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【參考范文】 Dear Peter, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【2013·全國大綱卷、新課標(biāo)II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，自制一些中國結(jié)（Chinese knot）。給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請(qǐng)他代賣，要點(diǎn)包括： 1.外觀（尺寸、顏色、材料） 2.象征意義 3.價(jià)格 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭語已為你寫好。 【參考范文】 Dear tom, How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you! Li hua. 2012年高考英語作文真題：全國卷2（含范文） 第三節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分30分） 假設(shè)你是李華。你班同學(xué)決定為小名舉辦生日聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你寫信邀請(qǐng)外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括： 1、時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)2、地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部3、內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等 4、要求：備小禮物 注意： 1、詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好； 2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3、答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。 One possible version Hi Susan, We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing 'Happy Birthday' togather for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too. Yours, Li Hua 2012年高考英語作文真題：全國卷1 第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）（注意:在試題卷上作答無效） 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（（the Internet）上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡（Singapore） 舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。 內(nèi)容主要包括： 1.自我介紹（包括英語能力）; 2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）; 3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。 注意: 1.數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好. 博泰典藏網(wǎng)btdcw.com包含總結(jié)匯報(bào)、計(jì)劃方案、表格模板、黨團(tuán)工作、出國留學(xué)、高中教育、IT計(jì)算機(jī)、外語學(xué)習(xí)以及全國卷歷年英語高考作文 等內(nèi)容。 |
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