二、用詞原則

1.用詞要簡(jiǎn)潔

能一個(gè)詞表達(dá)清楚的意思，就不要加上多余的成分，另外還要注意不要造句成意義上的重復(fù)累贅。

如：
原句：What you have done is illegal under the law .
優(yōu)化：What you have done is illegal .

2.用詞要多樣

注意不要一味地重復(fù)使用某個(gè)詞匯，可適當(dāng)轉(zhuǎn)換成同義詞或短語(yǔ)。也不要一=味地使用同一種詞性，要學(xué)會(huì)使用不同的詞性。

如：
原句：This can definitely make them work more enthusiastically .
優(yōu)化：This can definitely stimulate their working enthusiasm .

3.多用樸素、易懂的詞

對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō)，生僻或華麗的辭藻駕馭起來(lái)比較難，很容易使用不當(dāng)，很多時(shí)候不但不能給文章增色，反而可能會(huì)使閱卷老師困惑，起到負(fù)面作用。因此，建議考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量選用自己熟悉的詞語(yǔ)。

如：
原句：Parents in China always have altereations about their children's education .
優(yōu)化：Parents in China always have quarrels about their children's education .

4.多用具體的詞

如果詞的概括性太強(qiáng)，往往讓人覺(jué)得抽象、籠統(tǒng)，會(huì)給人模糊不清的感覺(jué)，詞義比較具體的詞會(huì)使表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)。

如：
原句：Some people like to read the newspaper very quickly and try to find some interesting stories .
優(yōu)化：Some people like to flip through the newspaper and try to find some interesting stories .

5.注意使用限定詞

當(dāng)定作時(shí)適當(dāng)使用限定詞來(lái)修飾可以使論述更加客觀、適度，避免觀點(diǎn)的絕對(duì)化。

如：
In general , young people seem more prone to job-hopping .
Nowadays the increasingly severe employment situation is perhaps the biggest challenge facing college students .