七、每日佳作賞析

Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Making All Decisions for Children . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.很多家長習(xí)慣于替孩子作決定，如選擇學(xué)校，選擇工作等。
2.分析這種現(xiàn)象給孩子帶來的影響。
3.你的看法是……

范文

In modern society , traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents . They (1) tend to make almost all decisions for their children , (2①) from (3①) choosing schools (2②) to (3②) picking up a profession . (2④) Sometimes even many detailed things (4) such as clothing and diets have to be decided by parents .

(5) However , deciding everything for children does (6①) not help them (6②) but harm them in many ways . (7①) On the one hand , it will make children lack independence and initiative , (8) which (9) is unfavorable to their development (10) in the long run . (7②) On the other hand , in many cases , parents' decisions are not always (11) in accordance with their children's personal ideas and interest . it will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth .

(12) From my point of view , (13①) it is unwise for parents to make every decision for their children . (13②) It is obvious that parents cannot accompany their children all the time . Growing to be independent is the natural way for everybody . Therefore , parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions . They can help their children (14) but not replace them to make choices .

點(diǎn)評(píng)
(1)意為“易于……，有……傾向”。
(2)針對(duì)all decisions做進(jìn)一步說明，富有層次感。
(3)都表示“選擇”，用詞富于變化。
(4)表示列舉。
(5)轉(zhuǎn)折引出下文，使上下文過渡自然、銜接緊密。
(6)意為“不是……而是”，用于連接并列成分。
(7)意為“一方面，……。另一方面，……”。
(8)which引出非限制性定于從句。
(9)意為“不利于”。
(10)意為“從長遠(yuǎn)來看”。
(11)意為“與……一致”。
(12)用于引出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。
(13)it充當(dāng)形式主語。
(14)意為“而不是，而不要”。

來源：原版英語網(wǎng)