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　　假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一位英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：

　　年齡；

　　性別；

　　愛好(旅游、運動、寵物等)。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節(jié)；

　　3.開頭語已為你寫好。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　Best regards,

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　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　Since Im quite interested in English, I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me? My ideal pen friend should be of my age, and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.

　　In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible, I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.

　　Best regards,

　　Li Hua

　　名師點評：

　　本文屬于比較“平”的文章，即穩(wěn)中求勝。文章沒有華麗的詞語，但是使用了一些短語和結構，能夠獲得老師的欣賞。首句是個原因狀語從句。文章也運用了定語從句來修飾boy，比較好。If possible這個省略句則表明作者對這類狀語從句的熟悉。

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　　好詞：1. candidate n.候選人2.share with 與…分享

　　好句：In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看來，像我這樣年齡的男生和我會有更多的共同語言。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

　　I have been learning English for two years and I hope to find an English pen friend so that I can get more improvement. Can you help me to find one?

　　Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend. In my opinion, people of the same age often have something to exchange. Thats why I want him to be of my age. If he likes doggy, that would be better because I can tell him something about my little doggy.Id be very thankful if you can help me. Hope to hear from you!

　　Best regards,

　　Li Hua

　　名師點評：

　　從整體上來說，本文寫得還是符合要求的，內(nèi)容完整，要點和結構也很齊全。語言的使用不在于華麗的辭藻而在于其一些復雜句子的組織。最值得我們學習的就是像好詞和好句中列舉的表達法。全文流暢而連貫，適合于模仿。

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　　好詞1.improvement n 改進2.do sb. a favor 幫助某人3. doggy n.小狗

　　好句1. Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend.我想尋找一個和我年紀相仿，喜歡旅游、體育的男孩來做我的筆友。

　　好處：of my age 年紀相仿；be fond of 喜歡。

　　2.Thats why I want him to be of my age，這就是為什么我希望筆友跟我年紀相仿的原因。

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　　一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳，請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容應該包括：

　　地點：距白山入口處500米；

　　房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天；

　　雙人間(共15間)，150元/天；

　　熱水淋??；

　　餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)；

　　游泳池：全天免費開放；

　　歡迎預定。

　　注意：

　　詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

　　可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

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　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　名師點評：

　　本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

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　　好詞1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.

　　所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。